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And Chapter 4


Incidentally, the best phrase i've heard about this ep was in the chatroom this morning:

"After the wedding, we all needed to take a deep breath"

Chapter 6 is up. Those pesky DEMONs

Well now, reviews are starting on chapter 6 so I think time to use this message board for it's truest purpose and open up a dialogue -

Ghost, the focus of a story is an interesting thing, sometimes it's linear -like a speech they make you give in high school. I tell you what I'm gonna tell you, then I tell you, then I tell you what I told you.
Sometimes it's a piece of music - introducing elements in the first movement and developing them with theme and variations throughout.
And sometimes it's chess - you gotta begin by getting all the pieces off the back rank and into the fray, then midgame you move them around and see what happens.
KnightLife is something a little different. It certainly began like music - that first patrol introduced a dozen elements some of which have played out and some which are only beginning to stir.
With Chapter 5 we're moving into chess territory, getting pieces arranged.
Will it work? I don't know. It's an experiment.



Karanne - I've said it as clearly as I can, in character and out, you're on the wrong track if you think there's a Bruce-Selina wedding on the horizon. Not everyone follows the same path in this world, and that's not a path B & S are interested in at this juncture.
Dick & Barb - like any real couple, they're making this up as they go along, and they're not always going to go about it the same way. Dick thinks like you - sure they might come back from the honeymoon and stay in Gotham for a month or so to catch their breaths, but they would certainly talk through permanent living arrangements.
Barbara made an assumption based on the living arrangements prior to the wedding.
Hence the conflict. It won't be the last one.
As for "Selina letting Bats use the cuffs on the scarecrow," that's not her decision. You don't "let" Batman do things his way, you just don't.
And she doesn't care. It was important Scarecrow bleed. He bled. After that her involvement in the episode was finished.


CM & Facade - you got it. Joker logic is a thing unto itself. Like Earthquakes - you can't predict it, all you can do is brace yourself in a doorway.


ORION! A Kiss on the mouth for you!
As always, you pick up on the little things I think no one will notice the first time thru and follow them to their logical conclusion.
There IS a WORLD of conceit in Babs's assumption - but she's not really an egomaniac is she? Not historically - something else at work there, I think. Only time will tell.

"Joker's fascination with 'Brucie'...And then there's the DEMON guys" Indeed. And don't forget Tim's internship, Larraby Chemicals, and that other 'family' corporation buying up so much Gotham Real Estate. There's a lot of big business making its presence felt in Gotham all of a sudden. How DEMON fits in should be interesting to discover. How JOKER might get involved, I shudder to think about.

Chris Dee
Gothamite
Posts: 102
(6/11/02 3:52 pm)
It's done, but alas, fanfiction.net is having some kind of spasm preventing me from uploading.
So for now, please visit the archive at Selina's Rooftop
http://selinasrooftop.homestead.com/files/fanficmain.htm

And I'll get it propped at FFnet as soon as the cybergods allow.

Allaine
Tourist
Posts: 11
(6/12/02 1:15 pm)
I'm not sure why, but when I read that line about Ulstarn seeing Attack of the Clones fourteen times, I laughed myself silly. Why couldnt Omar have at least recommended Spider-man instead? Cruel. :-D

Sincerely, Allaine